RE: The Power Inflicted

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Wed, 2011-11-16 15:19

I'm finalising my first three chapters of my novel, The Power Inflicted.

My question is: What are your feelings after reading the first chapter? I also want to know your impressions on the fight scene.

Please enjoy my other pieces as well, Dance Gently and Trial.

Thank you

Sam

Wed, 2011-11-16 16:05

I see you already have a good comment from Blessing on this piece, as well as a comment on each of your other pieces. I suggest you spend some time reading and leaving comments on other people's works. Try these links for a bit of background on the subject - http://www.abctales.com/forum/2011/11/07/forum-topics-clogged-stories-again http://www.abctales.com/forum/2011/11/12/comments-i-aint-got-any http://www.abctales.com/forum/2011/11/14/lost-newbie-trying-understand And this one for an alternative view - http://www.abctales.com/story/oldpesky/no-comments-please I'm sure you'll soon get the hang of it. Best of luck. And welcome to ABCtales, I hope you'll be very happy here once you have a look around.

Wed, 2011-11-16 17:40

No problem; I look forward to diving into yet another literary adventure :)

Wed, 2011-11-16 17:51

That's the spirit. Dive right in and make a great big splash.

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