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So here is the proposal see. What you do if your tired of the lmited voting thing and want to know more about the whole story/poem bag, is cat and paste a poem that say raises a question then dissemble it as an exercise. The poet doesn't know it's here by the way, so in itself that's exciting too.
I'm bored with the 1-5 business anyway, firstly there's not a 0 and that's a number too, and they don't have little labels attached to them all.

Anyway let's suck it and see. The stone may move from the dark cave that is our poetry.

I explore
secret, long
deserted valleys,
make unseen tracks
to find deep buried pleasure, slip,

lip-soft across your skin:
topping
the rise, break
like the sun,
about
your peak

and lock in my chest
the treasure
of your sleeping smile
lest I forget
awaking

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PS. for all you forum purists, this is writing from elsewhere, is it not.