Some critique will be appreciated.

Hello Alex, I finally read all the chapters of your Terra Nullis story. I wonder if it's biographical somehow, as the story is told from the view of the author. I dont want to say that it was boring but at the end of each chapter, I asked myself the same question: "What do I expect to see in a land like this which is described so dull and boring even by the author himself?" I wish you could make me more curious about the main character that I would feel encouraged to move on to the next chapter. The only thing that raised my interest was the yet unknown past of the hunter and even after you did that, you would also need more to convince me that he did chose to live in a land which he didnt belong at all. He isnt a sympathetic one at all:) but at the same time he doesnt do anything to be my favorite character too. So I hope you know what to do next. Good luck with the rest.

I have sent my story "The Return" to SS.net but I havent been informed that they will publish it or not. Never mind, you can still find my stories over here. I will read your other stories too asap. Besides, I am not writing anything now. Just assume that I am on a holiday:) I will only be a reader for some time. B.