by the radiator by 27

http://www.abctales.com/story/27/by-the-radiator-0

i thought this poem conveyed emotion without over sentimentality - however i did stumble slightly over the word cried, as you had only just used cry a few lines before. Maybe you could use a different word for cried?

the midget gem references really grounded this and tied it together well.

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Juliet