Please, I need your help

You soon realise that people do that a lot; read and leave no comments. It happens here and on other sites, so i at least choose something i am particularly concerned about or interested to know opinions on and post it in this forum.

One reason people don't leave comments is that there aren't any comment boxes beside the stories themselves. It's too much hassle to go to the forum and start a thread just to give some feedback or say you liked something.

Hi, I just read the first chapter of ‘I Need To Know’. My first thoughts were: Oh yuck, a soppy teenage love story (not the sort of thing a 56-year-old man likes to read). But apart from the second paragraph, where you twice slip from past to present tense, or vice-versa, it seems well written – far better than anything I would have written at age 17 - and the number of reads for subsequent chapters suggests that you have acquired a fan club. So keep writing – you may be wealthy best selling novelist by the time you are my age. Ian Guiseley, UK