I Survived 2176 (Short Story Series)

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Hi there, I wrote "part one" of a new short story I'm writing. And yes, it's going to be in parts. A short novel, but shorter than that even. I think. But I'd like to get your opinion on it, it'd be a lot of help. Thanks,
Savannah

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