Help needed, please!

Hi all

I am planning to self-publish (well, not really, just print out, bind, and keep to cherish) my collection Songs of Love. I'm not done writing the poems that will eventually go in, but I thought, instead of rushing ahead, it would be advisable to first edit through what I've got now. So any help would be much appreciated. I know many of you have left comments in the past, and I'm going to go and work my way through them soon, but I would appreciate more specific ideas as to what you would change. I would also be interested in which poems you think should make the final cut, so please post those ideas as replies to this post.

Thanks
Natalia