Foster - A boy and his tire

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Foster - A boy and his tire

http://www.abctales.com/story/foster/a-boy-and-his-tire

I thought this was great, especially the last line. There were wonderful images conjoured there, have you thought about adding illustrations and creating a book for small children? I know my five year old would consider this highly amusing. (and would probably try to befriend the tires of my car which he has already named The Geltilator)

You're right Lisa, it's original and very good, hilarious variant on the ineviable "end of pet - end of story".
Agree with what's been said, very original and a fun read. nobody
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Thanks for the flag, Lisa, and for the cherry, Neil. I’m glad you guys enjoyed this little ___ (I’m not quite sure what to call it). I love the children’s story idea, and my wife used to be an illustrator, so who knows - Foster.
flash or micro fiction is a tricky thing to do - i know i keep trying - this manages to develop a story and a character that i care about in so few words, with a great original plot. Juliet

Juliet

This is great story. I now want a tire as a pet! I agree with everyone's comments. This could be a wonderful story for children. My niece and nephew would love it. I especially love the part about the child sneaking the tire into his room. http://www.abctales.com/story/foster/a-boy-and-his-tire
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