Please read..

11 posts / 0 new
Topic locked
Last post
Sat, 2005-12-10 01:03
#1
my silent undoing
my silent undoing's picture
Please read..

I've posted a few things tonight; would appreciate your input. Thank you!

Top
  • 1757 reads
mikepyro
mikepyro's picture
suck up. lol I'm just kidding doors. Ur poems are just as good as before and I love the rhymes. But could u try to add one that's happier? The writings fine but they're all so gloomy. I tried this with my poem Ice Harvest. U can mix the two ways together.

Give me the beat boys and free my soul! I wanna getta lost in ya rock n' roll and drift away. Drift away...

Top
(Reply to #2)
my silent undoing
my silent undoing's picture
Yeah, I'm sorry.. I'm a bit of a misery-guts. I don't think that I actually have it in me to write something cheerful, but I will endeavour to try! Keep it up, mike, btw. I love everything I've seen.
Top
mikepyro
mikepyro's picture
Believe me doors ur writing isnt bad at all. I was wondering, do u only write poetry? If ignorence is bliss I'm the happiest kid on earth.

Give me the beat boys and free my soul! I wanna getta lost in ya rock n' roll and drift away. Drift away...

Top
(Reply to #4)
my silent undoing
my silent undoing's picture
Didn't you read my other bit, "Sod it"? Not a poem..
Top
mikepyro
mikepyro's picture
Sod it? Wait...Oh yes I missed that one I just read it. Well I guess I've read all of urs now. I put up a little bit more today, a new story and The Ice Harvest. Also my story of how i got diabetes. I'm staring my saddest poem yet. If lucky made u cry get ready to bawl. If ignorence is bliss I'm the happiest kid on earth.

Give me the beat boys and free my soul! I wanna getta lost in ya rock n' roll and drift away. Drift away...

Top
mikepyro
mikepyro's picture
Sod it? Wait...Oh yes I missed that one I just read it. Well I guess I've read all of urs now. I put up a little bit more today, a new story and The Ice Harvest. Also my story of how i got diabetes. I'm staring my saddest poem yet. If lucky made u cry get ready to bawl. If ignorence is bliss I'm the happiest kid on earth.

Give me the beat boys and free my soul! I wanna getta lost in ya rock n' roll and drift away. Drift away...

Top
mikepyro
mikepyro's picture
Sod it? Wait...Oh yes I missed that one I just read it. Well I guess I've read all of urs now. I put up a little bit more today, a new story and The Ice Harvest. Also my story of how i got diabetes. I'm staring my saddest poem yet. If lucky made u cry get ready to bawl. If ignorence is bliss I'm the happiest kid on earth.

Give me the beat boys and free my soul! I wanna getta lost in ya rock n' roll and drift away. Drift away...

Top
mikepyro
mikepyro's picture
WHOA!! What the heck happened to my computer? It did the reply three times then froze. lol sorry about that. If ignorence is bliss I'm the happiest kid on earth.

Give me the beat boys and free my soul! I wanna getta lost in ya rock n' roll and drift away. Drift away...

Top
my silent undoing
my silent undoing's picture
have you read the two poems i posted tonight? got a very rude reception for them, i found. i read all your stuff.. keep going, mike: in a few years you'll be up there with the best.. THE BEST. unlike me, obviously.
Top
mikepyro
mikepyro's picture
Wel you're just the kind of writor who's found what he's best at and stuck with it. I myself change up. Right now I'm working on a story of an American who helps plan an escape of the Iraqi camp that he is in. It involves a incredibly painful torture scene though. Lets just say I hope you've never had you're fingernails torn out completey. (ouch) If ignorence is bliss I'm the happiest kid on earth.

Give me the beat boys and free my soul! I wanna getta lost in ya rock n' roll and drift away. Drift away...

Top
Topic locked