One night stand. by windrose.

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One night stand. by windrose.

http://www.abctales.com/story/windrose/046-one-night-stand

at places incredibly graphic a really good read. Tell me in the book you are putting together .. will all the starting explanations be truly necessary?
or will you be able to edit some out as you go?

I'd prefer someone to analyse the story rather. Edit maybe losing the island touch, the community in the 60's, 70's and 80's...but i should.

 

if it s a continous book arnt the readers going to be caught up in the action and remember who is married to whome etc .. ? just perhaps?

maisie angel Guess what?  I'm still alive!

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