the rapid descent of the cool harpist

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Sat, 2006-04-22 11:13

Juliet OC

the rapid descent of the cool harpist

http://www.abctales.com/story/mickleberry/the-rapid-descent-of-the-cool-...

i liked this story, confidently told with a good last line.

The word dude did irritate a little - and i felt the end came up rather too quickly the night with Lucy was barely described, i would have liked more description of this, and how she got the harp.

but still a tale well told.

Juliet

Sun, 2006-04-23 18:32

mickleinapickle

http://www.freewebs.com/michaeljamestreacy/index.htm Thanks, Juliet. I normally only write poetry but I've been trying some humorous flash fiction lately - I need to diversify my writing 'cos just churning out poetry eventually sends you doolally, I think. Your remarks are invaluable and I'll take on board everything you've said. Thanks for your flag, your insightful comments and your generous spirit.

Sun, 2006-04-23 18:40

Juliet OC

ty for the compliment - if you are going to edit it, drop me an email and i will gladly read it again. Juliet

Juliet

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