what do you think?

Hello ;) I read your poem, and despite I'm not a big expert (in fact not at all) in poems I want to offer my feedback. I liked the "themes", especially the opening line "I know it should be green, I think so too", I can really relate to it. Also, I like the fact that it is more like a flow of conscience (Because it doesn't really follow a tidy pattern) and that some parts don't really make sense whe readed but still appeal to the reader's emotions. However, I do think this poem (if you're going to keep it straightly a poem) needs more structuring. It, as a poem, really lacks structure: commas,breaking sentences to give it some rhythm. But if you want to keep it as it is, you could turn it completely into this flow of conscience ( I don't really know if that's what you call it in English, but in case you don't: it is when the the writing seems like thoughts coming directly from the writer's/speaker's/character's head so they're like thoughts, like a thought pattern, and it don't necessarily has to have commas or full stops, cause, as it mimics thoughts, it doesn't have to be logical) and I think it'd really work for this one, since it is quite personal,and emotional. I don't know if this sound negative, if it does, I'm teribly sorry. I hope this helps, and keep writing ;)