Drip Drip by mikeyadriano

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Sat, 2007-03-24 01:47

I enjoyed this one. It made me smile but left me feeling distinctly uneasy as I sat in front of my screen! Creates a good atmosphere and some great observation of living with a teenager.

Could do with a bit of tidying up of the text, though.

http://www.abctales.com/story/mikeyadriano/drip-drip

Sat, 2007-03-24 07:32

mikeyadriano

Thanks Margharita...i've only just started trying to get going at writing so the positive feedback is cool - as is the advice! its hard when u've been sat there to be dispassionate. take care. Mikey G i just want a place i can call my own

i just want a place i can call my own

Sat, 2007-03-24 08:49

maddan

I enjoyed it too, though was a bit confused, was it a teenager, or a flatmate, or both? I also like The Read Madras a lot. http://www.abctales.com/story/mikeyadriano/real-madras

Sat, 2007-03-24 09:58

Margharita

Mikey - Congratulations on having the Real Madras cherrypicked - great stuff. M

Sat, 2007-03-24 11:24

mikeyadriano

is about a housemate, he's mid 20s but has all the attributes of a teenager...i'm often a bit confused by it too. My head might get big soon. still its early days innit. Peace out, Mikey i just want a place i can call my own

i just want a place i can call my own

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