RE: Our country not forgotten

Topic posted in response to Our country not forgotten : http://www.abctales.com/story/bodypolitic/belonging

I am new to poetry - if anyone has any feedback on this poem ive just written id love to hear. I initially just presented it as a stream of consciousness piece. But going back and working it into a poem seemed to feel more natural a form for me.

I welcome any comments.
thank you
hanna