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This poems does soemthing to me, it captures the inexorable flux of time, young to old, energy to lethargy, not thinking to evaluating.
I think it is a beautiful poem, sincere and sad.

yes i agree, the poem flows very lethargically, softly, like time gone by - it aches with longing while at the same time being acceptant of the way things are... not too emotional, i really like the rhythm of it...

 

Is there a time limit on the edit function? I noticed that after Jasper upset lots of people by removing threads he had started - that changes were made so that it was no longer possible to edit the founding post. I suspect this may still be the case and there is no time limit. .
Hahahaha. Thank you dear boy :O)
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