Prologue to Atriop

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Sun, 2007-01-14 23:40

Prologue to Atriop

Hey guys, can you please review the storey im in the process of writing. Im completely new to writing, and I want to know whether I have any potential. if so I want to carry on writing. The story Ive started so far is just an introduction, but I have a general idea of how to expand.

Please be brutally honets.

Thanks

Mark

mark_gg_daniels@yahoo.co.uk

Fri, 2007-01-19 11:12

a.c.t.

Hi Mark, I sent you an email about your story, don't know if you got it. I didn't realise you had posted this. Let me know if you didn't get it. It was full of praise by the way :-)

Thu, 2007-01-25 20:21

Juliet OC

I have to say despite mark's approach on the forum this is worth a read. Juliet

Juliet

Thu, 2007-01-25 21:18

maddan

I was put off by the second sentence of the excerpt (because I clicked on the set not the story, you see) "Shadows danced around on the concrete brick walls like ghosts, and was the only thing keeping this cold and damp room from being plunged into darkness."

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