I'd Appreciate Some feedback.

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Sun, 2011-11-06 04:03

I know that I haven't been on ABCtales for a very long time and also that I havn't commented on other people's work, but if you're interested in 'Chick Lit' (I know that this is a definition that is debated or not used but I can't think of the right genre yet) and you have a spare moment, then I would appreciate it if you could read the first Chapter of a book I'm writing. I'm quite unsure of myself and what I would really like to know is.

http://www.abctales.com/story/lindy/ciao-bella-chapter-one

-Does this make you want to read more?

-What do you think about my style of writing?

-Did you enjoy it, short as this snippet is?

Thank you.

Lindy

Sun, 2011-11-06 06:48

VGB_Suzie

Hi Lindy I havent had a look at your work yet, but I can comment that the 'Chick Lit' description doesn't inspire me to expect a very deep work, or thought provoking. Like I said, I haven't read your actual work, but thought to comment since I might possibly represent a portion of readers first impressions at this categorical description. That said, I'm sure there's a market for all genres of work, so if that's your passion, don't give up. Hope thats helpful Suz

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