I made a grown woman cry tonight: Spack

http://www.abctales.com/story/spack/i-made-a-grown-woman-cry-tonight

Great bits in this poem, and if I didn't know you I would hate you.

Truth is, she said those things about herself.
Joe, is nice really.
She was a very unhappy very drunk very desperate lady, and it was a very weird experience.

I think if this poem had more rhythm, it would sound like a Morrissey song.

Compliment in itself innit.

Span x