Part 5: Byrne

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Part 5: Byrne

http://www.abctales.com/story/byrne/part-5

I thought this was skilfully written and utterly terrifying.

Span

the whole scene seems so normal but the brooding fear symbolised in the black key really works - i will have to go and read the beginning now. Juliet

Juliet

Thanks for your comments guys. This is part of a very experimental - for me! - longer piece that I had to write for my course, so I really appreciate your comments.
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