Seventh Circle by Rokknite

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Seventh Circle by Rokknite
Bloody marvelous as always, reminded me of this

 

yes i enjoyed this good visceral write (esp. the warm oyster eyeballs), the ecstactic pain of hell vs the banal tranquillity of heaven, which we might equally transfer to lived life, the bad life being one of doing, the good life one of not doing, in some senses.

 

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i liked it too, Tim. If i were to criticise it's just the usual "could be a tad shorter." but nothing is howling out to go, it's just I start to wonder where it's all leading after a while. I can see it must have been fun writing it tho. x
Not sure it's nasty. Compared to a lot of Tim's stuff, it's bordering on twee. Good stuff, though.

 

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