Acrusia - any thoughts?

Hiya all
Just was writing a storey, the title still havent decided upon. Please could you give it a read and review. I do a lot of reviews anyway, but if you give me a review ill certainly return the favour. Quick note, starts on :INTRODUCTION and not :ONE (just in case)

Thanks all from the UK

Any suggestions on a title?!

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