RE: They
Thu, 2011-07-14 20:35
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RE: They
Topic posted in response to They : http://www.abctales.com/story/alphadog1/sandcastles-rewrite any comments would be appreciated.
alphadog1
in this story I am trying to embrace the writing of my hero's... so its a homage to them really. I think I might have let the cat out of the bag, in describing they too much... please tell me if this is the case, so I can tone it down... but this is my vision of my previous peice sandcastles... my confidence let me down... so I said F***k it and tried my damnedest to get what I saw in my mind on paper. Personally, I am still not sure I got it right; but I'd rather be honest, than not...