Fire on the Horizon - by Maddan
Tue, 2005-11-29 18:37
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Fire on the Horizon - by Maddan
http://www.abctales.com/node/546009
Just started having the time to read your entry, and jeez that's good! Not at all what I was expecting.
Please don't erase the chapters yet, I'll be reading over the next few days. The opening paragraph was particurally good.
Makes me realize that I have a long way to go.
PS surely this is no longer unedited?
Just had the first chance to read this as been on the computer all afternoon. This is lovely, sparky stuff Dan. I really enjoyed it and would read more.
thanks folks, I am really proud of the story.
One thing I realised is what an enormous amount of free time I actually have. It was not hard for me to spend at least four hours a day writing and revising, which made it a lot easier to write something half decent.