Red 12 A Brief History

Enjoyed it. Probably didn't need to ham up the irony in the final sentence but this was an interesting conceit, taken to its (il)logical conclusion. And it was funny. Nice one, Joe

Thanks Edgar and Spack. Spack - I agree about the last sentence and have rewritten. God, it's like being back at uni, this writing course. I've got it tonight, and wrote this at about 2am last night.... Enzo.. www.thedevilbetweenus.com

Very enjoyable, I love the subtle humour. i don't think it needs to last 2 paragraphs. Juliet

Excellent, Enzo. I love everything in this set. Maybe I should take a writing course.

Okay, I assumed this was going to be a FF7 prequel fanfic. Ich bin ein úbergeek.

Thanks Foster. Actually, this is the first thing I've written since starting the course. I've got to say, most of what's taught is obvious but the lady teaching is fantastically knowledgable and interesting. It's something to keep me off the streets on a Tuesday night, anyway! Enzo.. www.thedevilbetweenus.com

i want to know what the first last sentence was now