Paterfamilias by Archergirl.

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Paterfamilias by Archergirl.

http://www.abctales.com/story/archergirl/paterfamilias

I loved this, it spoke volumes without saying too much. Subtle and sad at the same time.

Thanks for flagging, QueenElf!
paranthesis works really well. I identified with the last line especially.

 

I really liked this. Works better for the thoughts in parenthesis. And yes, sad.
I really enjoyed this too. It was done really well.
A beautiful poem - like a conversation that may never be fully had, strung with bracketed heavy heartedness. And that half is more prose-ish and makes the poem as a whole all the more moving (suggests the sometimes huge vistas between people...). Courageous, I thought.
Agreed Galfreda. Courageous and surprisingly touching. Well done Archergirl - your arrow has hit another target. Check out my website: http://www.francesmacaulayforde.com
I agree with all that's been said already, a moving piece of writing. nobody
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