Small talk by Rokkitnite
Tue, 2006-06-06 19:58
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Small talk by Rokkitnite
http://www.abctales.com/story/rokkitnite/small-talk
The line at the end of the first verse (? is that what you call it?) made me laugh out loud.
Here's my effort at constructive criticism - the line about the steak seemed a little out of place.
The spunk bit was brilliant. They do exactly that, don't they - you've just ruined sausages for me.
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