The Tao of rachel dahan

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The Tao of rachel dahan

just finished my first battlescene for my new novel would love to hear wat anyone thinks

http://www.abctales.com/story/daron316/the-tao-of-rachel-dahan

i like this piece very much, wonderful visuals via the adjectives, vivid sounds and smells. was very easy to read as it flowed well and held my interest; i enjoy soldiers and battle. thank you for sharing it with us. in writing, `t. imaan tretchicovmanicova~ "think deeply, speak gently, love much, laugh aloud, work hard, give freely and be kind."
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