The Tao of rachel dahan
Tue, 2006-08-01 22:37
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The Tao of rachel dahan
just finished my first battlescene for my new novel would love to hear wat anyone thinks
http://www.abctales.com/story/daron316/the-tao-of-rachel-dahan
i like this piece very much, wonderful visuals via the adjectives, vivid sounds and smells. was very easy to read as it flowed well and held my interest; i enjoy soldiers and battle. thank you for sharing it with us. in writing, `t. imaan tretchicovmanicova~
"think deeply, speak
gently, love much, laugh
aloud, work hard, give
freely and be kind."