Daniel by Patrick Allard.

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Tue, 2007-02-20 13:24

http://www.abctales.com/story/patrick-allard/daniel

Take your time before posting, Patrick: this could have done with a read beforehand, because there are a few pronouns etc dropped out of the text.
It might put some people off, which would be a real shame.
It is a difficult subjet, well-handled.
A good sign was that I was so engrossed that I feared for the outcome.

Wed, 2007-02-21 10:57

patrick_allard

Thanks for your comment, I appreciate it. I did check it through, but obviously not well enough. I'll give it another read through. Thanks, Patrick.

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