Companion by Noah

http://www.abctales.com/story/noahruderman/companion

This piece eloquently describes growing up and moving on. Some of the description is really moving and had me smiling in recognition.

I am not sure about the title i don't think it does justice to the piece, maybe use a bit of the prose e.g 'I found someone else I could love'

I also felt the final paragraph is not needed, the regret is obvious and the piece seems to naturally end where it begins.

A very enjoyable read.

Juliet