feedback on my writing please.

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Wed, 2011-09-28 01:08

Hi I'm working on my first novel and I would really appreciate feedback. I would also love to have a writing critique partner (or two). I'm not sure how I link to my stories... I'm new here...but here is my username and what the story is called (so far)

Posted by eternaldream24 on September 28, 2011 - 01:00
from the ABC set untitled young adult fantasy novel

Thanks

Wed, 2011-09-28 02:33

Savx

Hey, I really liked the story, but the fact that there are grammer issues bothers me. I don't know why, that stuff just seems to jump out at me, barking right in my face. If you could fix that, then your story would be perfectly fine. I really like it. When's the next part coming out? =) Savannah

Sav

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