The Carpenter by Chant

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The Carpenter by Chant

I like this little poem, find it charming. If it was for me I would delete the last line, ending it with "spine..."
evocative.... spine tingling?

oops...fooled by the cannot display page yet again!
I enjoyed reading this also, and I actually like the last line, am not too sure about the work sawed though, should it be sawn? A.
Ahhh so refreshing chants work is. I sense a real feeling of erotic fancy in this little number. I would not change a thing. It also begs the question, is it Art or is it Craftsmanship, and is there a difference, from the creators point of view? The poem is very cool, but then again, so is Chant...he loves me egoing him up, don't ya chant? Smiling Tai

Indescribable!

yutka, thank for starting the thread! camus, loose, tai, thanks for commenting! and now i'll have a bit more of that egoing up if you don't mind, tai.

 

Chant I just can't help myself!lol trouble is, where does the time go? Just so much talent out there, I am gonna catch up on yours for sure. Ego building smile.... Scarey tai

Indescribable!

I don't know about your ego chant, but I know you've always been good. I sure wish you'd consider letting me put your work up here in the states. BLATANT HINT! It's not a bug...it's a mammal

It's not a bug...it's a feature.

cheers, radio! what's the name of your site?

 

As loose_cypher says - good self-restraint on use of words, and definately a bit erotic!
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