Changing day by Camus

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Wed, 2005-10-12 10:24

Soraia Almeida

Changing day by Camus

Brilliant poem! 10/10

http://www.abctales.com/story/camus/changing-day

It sounds so familiar, not the poem that is, but definitly the situation.

Absolutly love this:

'Crumpled mornings,
Remembered,
Too easy to dream.
Stains of fierce moments,
Your time has now been'.

Have you been reading my mind?

Keep up the good work!

Soraia

Wed, 2005-10-12 10:39

pepsoid

Direct, a bit icky, but you get the point!

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Wed, 2005-10-12 10:43

Brighton Rock

a bit icky?hmmm. tis a good poem, i particularly liked Crumpled mornings (hope that's doesn't offend anyone of a sensitive disposition)

Wed, 2005-10-12 11:05

camus

Soraia, Thanks for your comments, glad you enjoyed it, promise I didn't read your mind! 10/10 hmmm generous, but thanks. Peps, Thanks, er, you do actually know that the poem isn't about washing dirty sheets hun don't you? Tim, you're a darling as usual, thanks for the carrot! A.

Wed, 2005-10-12 12:33

pepsoid

>>> Peps, Thanks, er, you do actually know that the poem isn't about washing dirty sheets hun don't you? ...Well... erm... of course... :-/ ...I just find any mention of stains a bit icky... I did like it though! "P"

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Wed, 2005-10-12 14:03

camus

Phew, thank goodness, was worried that I may have to enlist L & M to explain. Anyway glad you liked it. A.

Wed, 2005-10-12 14:25

pepsoid

L&M would think it was about washing dirty sheets... But they'd still consider that deeply significant... :-/ "P"

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