crop circles juliet oc

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Sun, 2006-02-19 12:46

http://www.abctales.com/story/juliet-oc/crop-circles

A little slice of darkness, prose of vicious beauty with not a drop wasted.
I know that sounds pretentious, but this was powerful, and steered well clear of being sensationalist. Still thinknig about it.
To quote the lady, ty for a great read.

Sun, 2006-02-19 15:40

QueenElf

I read it this morning and came back to it twice. Not a word wasted, like violence its snappy & straight to the point. It gave me real goosebumps.

Lfuller

Sun, 2006-02-19 16:01

marandina

Yes, very chilling indeed and nicely done is so few words. Ironically, it suffers a little from its brevity. The concept is promising enough to spend much longer on it. Just my view, of course....

Mon, 2006-02-20 16:49

Juliet OC

ty for the comments, much appreciated. I was pleased with this, though hadn't realised how violent my male voice is, that must be why i have written a book without any men in :) Juliet

Juliet

Thu, 2006-02-23 19:47

QueenElf

and a very good book it's turning out to be.

Lfuller

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