Internet dating fraud
Mon, 2006-03-06 18:15
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Internet dating fraud
http://www.abctales.com/story/warden/internet-dating-fraud
I liked both of warden's pieces today. This made me laugh and its use of strong rhymes didn't piss me off - which for me is amazing!
It turns nicely as well. I like a poem with a narrative arc.
Joe
Nigel Slater AND The Sound of Music? In the same poem? Warden you are really spoiling us...
I really enjoyed this poem, I'm often put off by rhyming but I think that here, it gives it the rhythm it needs and sort of compliments the humour too...
I would like to meet a shark-fighting, Pamplona-bull-running, astronaut.