My First Novel!

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Thu, 2007-04-12 22:47

My First Novel!

Hello everyone, I recently posted the first two chapters of my novel on this site and was honored by a cherry on one (thanks guys). I will be taking a little break from the site to work on it and just relax. Before I go I was hoping that someone might give me some feedback on the chapters if it's not too much trouble. I'd appreciate it. :)

Chapter 1
http://abctales.com/story/mikepyro/rain-hell-chapter-1

Chapter 2
http://abctales.com/story/mikepyro/rain-hell-chapter-2

Fri, 2007-04-13 08:52

tcook

So Mikepyro takes the next step. I shall look at them as soon as I have a moment and get back to you. Best of luck with it.

Fri, 2007-04-13 09:24

Juliet OC

Mike, i cherried the first chapter as i was firstly taken by the characters, great descriptions, and also the plot seemed to have potential to lead into a juicy story. I will read chapter 2 soon and let you know what i think. Good luck in writing it. i take it this is the first draft? if so don't worry too much about making the writing perfect. You'll more than likely rewrite it a number of times before your happy. Juliet

Juliet

Fri, 2007-04-13 21:44

QueenElf

It's really hard writing a novel and not getting much encouragement from family & friends. Well, thats where ABC steps in. Hopefully you will start to feel more confident now & congrats on the cherry.

Lfuller

Sat, 2007-04-14 19:31

mikepyro

This isn't the final draft for them, I'm still editing, but the layouts of the first two chapters are pretty much finished. And thanks Juliet, you too tcook, I appreciate all the help ya'll have given me.

Give me the beat boys and free my soul! I wanna getta lost in ya rock n' roll and drift away. Drift away...

Sat, 2007-04-14 23:34

Silver Spun Sand

Just good luck, Mike. Tina

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