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Part Two of my Whitstable Writings. Based on the true stories of how the French prisoners of war escaped the hulks in the Thames during the Napleonic wars.
26 of my comments have received 25 Great Feedback votes
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Pick of the Day and Poem of the Week
Posted on Thu, 08 Dec 2016
To write a nonsense poem is not as easy as it might seem. First of all it must flow beautifully - and this does - then it must have really wonderful new words - and this does - and finally it must have some sense in it, and this certainly does....
Whilst we all know the horror of the teenage girl and the cruelty dished out this is still a good story, well told. The characterisation is excellent and the flow is spot on.
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I like this very much - the passion in it is almost touchable. But I do agree with jolono - it needs a bit of work. Go though it sentence by sentence and ask yourself - is this necessary and does it follow on from the sentence before? Hone it...
I am lucky enough to have a largish colony of lesser horseshoes (which are very rare) living above my kitchen. They endure my loud Frank Zappa sessions, the cooking smells and the laughter - and in return I give them a specially engineered bat...
Can't be bad! And it isn't. I read and re-read this before getting to the bottom of every careful word. Definitely a poet writing prose - and doesn't it work well?
I'm sure that's right - we worry and fret over things. We sweat over our self esteem - and it's because we dare to put it our there and have others judge us. If only a few more generals and politicians had such fears!
I don't really understand the confusion over this one. I think it's pretty plain as day as far as poetry goes. Maybe you are all trying to see more into it than is there. If you take it at face value it all makes pretty decent sense to me - and...
Pick of the Day and Poem of the Week
Posted on Thu, 08 Dec 2016
To write a nonsense poem is not as easy as it might seem. First of all it must flow beautifully - and this does - then it must have really wonderful new words - and this does - and finally it must have some sense in it, and this certainly does....
Read full commentPosted in Fernundaling
Pick of the Day
Posted on Tue, 22 Nov 2016
Whilst we all know the horror of the teenage girl and the cruelty dished out this is still a good story, well told. The characterisation is excellent and the flow is spot on.
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Read full commentPosted in The Disco
Pick of the Day
Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2016
The raw and visceral nature of this poem will move any reader. You do so well to capture it. A no brainer for Pick of the Day.
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Posted in Blue
I like it
Posted on Thu, 17 Nov 2016
I like this very much - the passion in it is almost touchable. But I do agree with jolono - it needs a bit of work. Go though it sentence by sentence and ask yourself - is this necessary and does it follow on from the sentence before? Hone it...
Read full commentPosted in The Food Bank
Lesser Horseshoes
Posted on Tue, 08 Nov 2016
I am lucky enough to have a largish colony of lesser horseshoes (which are very rare) living above my kitchen. They endure my loud Frank Zappa sessions, the cooking smells and the laughter - and in return I give them a specially engineered bat...
Read full commentPosted in Bat Time
Pick of the Day and Story of the Week
Posted on Thu, 27 Oct 2016
Great to see you back on ABC - and with a cracking story too! It's our Pick of the Day and our Story of the Week.
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Great stuff
Posted on Sun, 16 Oct 2016
So glad these have had a good reaction - I've got a few of my own to put on now! This is a cracker.
Read full commentPosted in DR BEECHING
Pick of the Day and Story of the Week
Posted on Thu, 21 Jul 2016
Can't be bad! And it isn't. I read and re-read this before getting to the bottom of every careful word. Definitely a poet writing prose - and doesn't it work well?
Posted in Dogs
Doubt
Posted on Mon, 15 Feb 2016
I'm sure that's right - we worry and fret over things. We sweat over our self esteem - and it's because we dare to put it our there and have others judge us. If only a few more generals and politicians had such fears!
Read full commentPosted in Doubt is my mistress
Don't understand
Posted on Mon, 15 Feb 2016
I don't really understand the confusion over this one. I think it's pretty plain as day as far as poetry goes. Maybe you are all trying to see more into it than is there. If you take it at face value it all makes pretty decent sense to me - and...
Read full commentPosted in Doubt is my mistress
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