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I have 132 stories published in 11 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 455714 times and 192 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1000 of my 4,463 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1086 votes

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Assorted writers' groups, the odd anthology, occasional readings.  Lots of looking out of the window.  Hello, and thanks for dropping by.

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Readings of Episodes One and Two of the Pad Life Journals are now available on Sound Cloud: https://soundcloud.com/user-968566758   More to follow!

 

 

 

 

1000 of my comments have received 1086 Great Feedback votes

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Beautiful language. I too was

Posted on Tue, 18 Jan 2022

Beautiful language. I too was particularly struck by the image of the stars scattering, so it's interesting what you say about wolves eating the stars. Also the last two lines, 'together there is a way through the forest' really evoked that image...

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Posted in Wolves, blizzard

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This really evoked a memory

Posted on Tue, 18 Jan 2022

This really evoked a memory in me, Jenny - I think I must have gone there as a child, even though I can't actually remember the occasion. Poetry does that for us - brings up memories and emotions that are normally lying just below the surface....

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Posted in Burnham Beeches

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Enjoyed reading this - and

Posted on Sat, 15 Jan 2022

Enjoyed reading this - and the discussion below! So many things that were mainstream Labour policy some years ago are now viewed as extreme left threats to civilisation. And of course, if you suggested nationalising the railways again, there...

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Posted in Big Man Up Front

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With you all the way on this

Posted on Sat, 15 Jan 2022

With you all the way on this one. It's obscene. I'm all for people being entrepreneurial, and if they want to buy a yacht that's fine, but when it gets to this level of wealth, there is something seriously wrong. I really like your metaphor of...

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Posted in Money - some context

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This is great - so much

Posted on Sun, 16 Jan 2022

This is great - so much lovely detail and your central idea, of the different coffees evoking different memories, is marvellous. I finished the story feeling that I really wanted to see this gentleman sitting by the window, quietly drinking his...

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Posted in Mr. Lee's Cafe

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Story of the Week

Posted on Fri, 14 Jan 2022

This is also our Story of the Week! Congratulations! 

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Posted in The God of Mistakes

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Pick of the Day

Posted on Fri, 14 Jan 2022

This funny and delightful story is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day! Please do share/retweet if you enjoy it too. 

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Posted in The God of Mistakes

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Absolutely loved this. And

Posted on Wed, 12 Jan 2022

Absolutely loved this. And that picture melts your heart. It's always intrigued me, why animals end up in rescue centres or wherever, looking for new homes. The first two cats I had were middle aged sisters from the RSPCA, and I never did find...

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Posted in How I Came to Meet Eric

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The alteration makes it work

Posted on Fri, 14 Jan 2022

The alteration makes it work better for me, for what it's worth. It's such a thoughtful and well-written story.

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Posted in Mr Smelly (2)

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Delightful. Great humour, and

Posted on Fri, 14 Jan 2022

Delightful. Great humour, and a nice message at the end. Really enjoyed this! 

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Posted in The God of Mistakes

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