Home Read Write Forums Blogs avengingadriennePrimary tabsView(active tab) Track I have one story published in 0 collections on the site. My stories have been read 522 times Adrienne Clark My stories Type - Any -StoryNon-fictionOtherPoemPoetry MonthlyBiography Genre - Any -NoirSpiritualYoung WritersSurrealTalecatchingScience fictionRomanceQuotationsRantReviewsTravelUnclassifiedWesternPhilosophyOther Non-fictionEroticaFantasyHistorical FictionDramaCrimeBiographyChildren'sHorrorHumourNatureOpinionOther FictionMiscellaneousLoveInspiration Point (work that responds to our weekly writing cue)JournalAutobiography Awards Cherry-picked - Any -TrueFalse Pick of the day - Any -TrueFalse Poem of the week - Any -TrueFalse Story of the week - Any -TrueFalse Stories per page 510204060 Subway - 1st draft By avengingadrienne on Thu, 16 Jul 2009 polite and useful critique appreciated. thank you for reading and watching. please comment on whether sexual current should be further exaggerated or sublimated.MiscellaneousStoryCertificate PG Read more about Subway - 1st draft 3 comments Log in to post comments 522 reads
avengingadriennePrimary tabsView(active tab) Track I have one story published in 0 collections on the site. My stories have been read 522 times Adrienne Clark My stories Type - Any -StoryNon-fictionOtherPoemPoetry MonthlyBiography Genre - Any -NoirSpiritualYoung WritersSurrealTalecatchingScience fictionRomanceQuotationsRantReviewsTravelUnclassifiedWesternPhilosophyOther Non-fictionEroticaFantasyHistorical FictionDramaCrimeBiographyChildren'sHorrorHumourNatureOpinionOther FictionMiscellaneousLoveInspiration Point (work that responds to our weekly writing cue)JournalAutobiography Awards Cherry-picked - Any -TrueFalse Pick of the day - Any -TrueFalse Poem of the week - Any -TrueFalse Story of the week - Any -TrueFalse Stories per page 510204060 Subway - 1st draft By avengingadrienne on Thu, 16 Jul 2009 polite and useful critique appreciated. thank you for reading and watching. please comment on whether sexual current should be further exaggerated or sublimated.MiscellaneousStoryCertificate PG Read more about Subway - 1st draft 3 comments Log in to post comments 522 reads