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This poem is poignant and
Posted on Thu, 07 Jun 2018
This poem is poignant and wistfully sad. So true how things we leave behind can be both a source of comfort and an amplification of our loss! Ending is simply a bit of genius!
First thing this poem did was snap a picture before my eyes of a canoe careening down the rapids. Reading it again brought a feeling of nostalgia, perhaps a bit of loss and wistful remembrance. Nicely done!
Airy and spring-like, this gentle verse evokes the fresh scents of May and the burgeoning of life in springtime. Love the moss covered wall and bluebells, nice juxtaposition of spring colors that creates an instant picture in the reader's mind....
This is enchanting! It truly give the reader that "summery" feeling. Your images, one by one, build on one another beautifully to create the scene. I think everyone's had a similar experience when you see someone you're sure you know!...
This is apropos to our lives today, for sure! I am guilty of dabbling and paddling in a chair myself! This is a cute way to point out the urgency of living that we seem to have forgotten. Short but meaningful, nicely done.
This poem is poignant and
Posted on Thu, 07 Jun 2018
This poem is poignant and wistfully sad. So true how things we leave behind can be both a source of comfort and an amplification of our loss! Ending is simply a bit of genius!
Read full commentPosted in Here Are Things
First thing this poem did was
Posted on Thu, 07 Jun 2018
First thing this poem did was snap a picture before my eyes of a canoe careening down the rapids. Reading it again brought a feeling of nostalgia, perhaps a bit of loss and wistful remembrance. Nicely done!
Read full commentPosted in Passage
Airy and spring-like, this
Posted on Wed, 30 May 2018
Airy and spring-like, this gentle verse evokes the fresh scents of May and the burgeoning of life in springtime. Love the moss covered wall and bluebells, nice juxtaposition of spring colors that creates an instant picture in the reader's mind....
Read full commentPosted in renewable 2 (second go at this)
This is enchanting! It truly
Posted on Fri, 01 Jun 2018
This is enchanting! It truly give the reader that "summery" feeling. Your images, one by one, build on one another beautifully to create the scene. I think everyone's had a similar experience when you see someone you're sure you know!...
Read full commentPosted in El primero de junio
This is apropos to our lives
Posted on Fri, 01 Jun 2018
This is apropos to our lives today, for sure! I am guilty of dabbling and paddling in a chair myself! This is a cute way to point out the urgency of living that we seem to have forgotten. Short but meaningful, nicely done.
Read full commentPosted in Time Flies