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I have 17 stories published in
one collection on the site.
My stories have been read 18716 times
and 9 of my stories have been cherry picked.
Nicholas Garrard
My stories
REVISION: Song of Smoke - Chapter 1
Thoughts have changed with this one: new start, altered tone. New title (I'm toying with 'The Language of Stones'). Some new details. I'd be thrilled, as ever, with any comments proffered. N.
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A Song of Smoke - Chapter 1
A first coy look at my burgeoning opus. Interested in reactions - does it hook you well? Atmosphere? Do I dump too much information?
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The Killing Floor
What's that on the end of your fork?
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The Return
The opening of something longer, meaner and perhaps a little scarier. Aimed at a young-adult audience. How do people feel about the tone?
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Bargain Brautigan
So this girl walks into a shop...
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