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As Autumn turns to Winter's chill, forest hunger draws us where fallen dead leaves scrunch beneath boots. Whispered breath of timid deer in brushwood...
This is such an enjoyable read. Mary does seem to express many charismatic qualities. I can understand why you appreciated her company. I loved the magpie in her too, it reminded me of myself when younger, not so much these days now I'm getting...
It sounds like a midnight to sunrise party's a great idea. I hope Jon does come back for Perfdia, felt so sorry for the poor woman remembering the loss of her father.
I loved the idea of the veil, it adds a touch of magic and mystery to your story Paul. It also feels like he's between two worlds. I'm eager to read more, as I'm fascinated by the boy sittting on the outer ridge.
You evoke the excitement of an approaching storm, which is so apt for my part of the world. The only green comes from the trees where I live, there's been no decent rain for such a long time.
I'm truly into your story,
Posted on Sun, 24 Aug 2025
I'm truly into your story, now wondering what mode of transport Thomas has in mind for the next part of their escape.
Gripping read as always Penny.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in "Art of Trouble" 5
Constable John isn't as green
Posted on Sun, 24 Aug 2025
Constable John isn't as green as he sounds, at least he would have had the sense to insist on looking upstairs.
So many stories unfolding...what with the skelington in the back yard, and now harbouring a criminal.
You're really...
Read full commentPosted in Denied (Episode 22 - The Further Chronicles of a Young Lady (and her Maid))
This is such an enjoyable
Posted on Thu, 21 Aug 2025
This is such an enjoyable read. Mary does seem to express many charismatic qualities. I can understand why you appreciated her company. I loved the magpie in her too, it reminded me of myself when younger, not so much these days now I'm getting...
Read full commentPosted in Mary's Missing Teapot
It sounds like a midnight to
Posted on Sat, 16 Aug 2025
It sounds like a midnight to sunrise party's a great idea. I hope Jon does come back for Perfdia, felt so sorry for the poor woman remembering the loss of her father.
Looking forward to next part.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 31
I loved the idea of the veil,
Posted on Tue, 19 Aug 2025
I loved the idea of the veil, it adds a touch of magic and mystery to your story Paul. It also feels like he's between two worlds. I'm eager to read more, as I'm fascinated by the boy sittting on the outer ridge.
Some haunting moments amid...
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy - The Immortal Witch (6)
Very appropriate words in
Posted on Tue, 19 Aug 2025
Very appropriate words in your poem Rhiannon. We're in much need of rain where I live, haven't had a good downpour for ages.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in That all-important molecule!
Let's hope Sergeant Argent
Posted on Sun, 17 Aug 2025
Let's hope Sergeant Argent doesn't search the attic, if that's where Aefelthrith has led John Thomas.
I thought it was so funny when the Sergeant was knocking on the door and fell towards Gwlady's ample bosom. Could just picture the scene...
Read full commentPosted in Lofted (Episode 21 - The Further Chronicles of a Young Lady (and her Maid))
Love your poem of this gifted
Posted on Sun, 17 Aug 2025
Love your poem of this gifted musician. He was obviously born to play in his own unique way.
That last stanza summed up the bohemian life he must have led, so beautifully. A taste of a style I love.
Thank you for sharing Turlough...
Read full commentPosted in Django, Gitáno Gitaristo (Django, Gypsy Guitarist)
I've known kids like Marcus,
Posted on Sat, 16 Aug 2025
I've known kids like Marcus, from when I was young. Having a dad that's been in and out of prison, it's hardly surprising the boy's ended up this way.
Unmistakably relevant narrative to the pressures of living on a Council Estate, are...
Read full commentPosted in The Vale - Chapter 6
You evoke the excitement of
Posted on Sat, 16 Aug 2025
You evoke the excitement of an approaching storm, which is so apt for my part of the world. The only green comes from the trees where I live, there's been no decent rain for such a long time.
Loved your poem Frances.
Jenny....
Read full commentPosted in A Second Chance
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