I really enjoy writing but find it difficult to get constructive feedback. Usually what I get is "Yes, very good." Nothing more than that. When what I really want to know is -what parts did you like and what parts didn't work for you? That is if I can get anyone to read it in the first place. I have Parkinson's and I am finding it increasingly difficult to type which is very frustrating. Plays and poems are the main focus for my writing. This is so disjointed but hitting all wrong keys. Apologies!
My Stories
Such Nice People...Them Tax Collectors! (I.P.)
First published on May 19, 2013 - 07:45 | 31 reads
Parkinson's Awareness Week - My fourth poem - Hope!
First published on April 18, 2013 - 10:00 | 41 reads
The Flip Side!
First published on April 16, 2013 - 09:18 | 23 reads
SEASONS!
First published on April 15, 2013 - 07:31 | 116 reads
Footsie Time is Here!
First published on April 13, 2013 - 08:41 | 78 reads
A Limerick for FTSE 100
First published on April 12, 2013 - 15:13 | 165 reads
Fathers and Sons! I. P.
First published on April 11, 2013 - 21:36 | 82 reads
A Resurrected Heart! Late (I.P.)
First published on April 5, 2013 - 06:37 | 103 reads
Loneliness! Re-posted
First published on February 20, 2013 - 06:15 | 312 reads
A Trilogy of Connected Poems Part Two Art
First published on February 6, 2013 - 09:33 | 61 reads
Dripsnot Goes in Search of a Wife!
First published on January 29, 2013 - 11:14 | 203 reads
A Window Cleaner and an Exotic Dancer! (I.P.)
First published on January 16, 2013 - 23:02 | 209 reads
Infinite Sky entry three
First published on January 8, 2013 - 13:35 | 138 reads
Infinite Sky - A Face in the Clouds - entry two
First published on January 7, 2013 - 13:42 | 130 reads
Infinite Sky!
First published on December 26, 2012 - 22:17 | 248 reads
The Marriage of Naomi (I P) Part Three
First published on December 3, 2012 - 22:38 | 211 reads
The Marriage of Naomi! (I P) Part Two
First published on December 3, 2012 - 22:04 | 130 reads
The Marriage of Naomi! (I P) Part One
First published on December 3, 2012 - 21:15 | 113 reads
Gene Kelly - I Want A Word With You! (I.P.)
First published on November 29, 2012 - 15:19 | 143 reads
A Short Arse! (Another late I.P)
First published on November 23, 2012 - 20:26 | 140 reads
A Spoonful of Jam! (Late I.P.)
First published on November 16, 2012 - 18:09 | 145 reads
The Worm That Turned!
First published on November 11, 2012 - 07:15 | 135 reads
The Long Goodbye A Tribute to My Mum!
First published on November 5, 2012 - 22:30 | 157 reads
My Mum and a Wedding!
First published on November 5, 2012 - 10:53 | 128 reads
"Checkout" Scene Ten The Conclusion
First published on November 4, 2012 - 09:36 | 90 reads
"Checkout" Scene 9 The penultimate scene
First published on November 1, 2012 - 12:11 | 94 reads
Didn't We Have a Lovely Day the Day We Went To...?
First published on October 31, 2012 - 15:54 | 126 reads
The Good Doctor I. P. Part Two
First published on October 29, 2012 - 13:08 | 172 reads
The Good Doctor I.P. Part One
First published on October 29, 2012 - 12:55 | 137 reads
Am I Who I Was Meant To Be?
First published on October 29, 2012 - 10:19 | 91 reads
"Checkout" Scene Eight
First published on October 21, 2012 - 17:03 | 97 reads
"Checkout" Scene Seven
First published on October 19, 2012 - 14:21 | 87 reads
Just a Rope and a Chair!
First published on October 15, 2012 - 08:13 | 122 reads
"Checkout" Scene Six
First published on October 12, 2012 - 13:27 | 116 reads
Nurse Brannigan Is Fully Recovered. Approx 654 words..
First published on October 11, 2012 - 08:02 | 172 reads
Reflections On A Lost Love
First published on October 10, 2012 - 07:42 | 129 reads
I Dreamt
First published on October 10, 2012 - 07:37 | 220 reads
Unlock the Gates
First published on October 10, 2012 - 07:30 | 92 reads
A Composite Speech
First published on October 6, 2012 - 07:51 | 118 reads
Miss Lavender and Her Adventure in Bluebell Woods!
First published on October 2, 2012 - 22:29 | 119 reads
A Flat Pack! A Handyman! And A Hangover! (I.P.)
First published on September 28, 2012 - 11:36 | 209 reads
A Tale of Two Puddings (I.P.)
First published on September 20, 2012 - 21:09 | 162 reads
The Classroom! A Monologue
First published on September 20, 2012 - 10:01 | 211 reads
"Checkout" Scene Five
First published on September 18, 2012 - 09:42 | 151 reads
Baguettes - If you see a notice - read it all! (I.P.)
First published on September 13, 2012 - 14:14 | 126 reads
"Checkout" Scene Four
First published on September 11, 2012 - 17:06 | 169 reads
"Checkout" Scene Three
First published on September 7, 2012 - 12:00 | 186 reads
Weight and See! A Monologue
First published on September 6, 2012 - 13:00 | 129 reads
"Checkout" Scene Two
First published on September 5, 2012 - 14:37 | 204 reads
Neil Armstrong Moonwalker
First published on September 3, 2012 - 16:35 | 95 reads
"Checkout" The Legacy
First published on September 3, 2012 - 09:55 | 151 reads
This One's For Julie!
First published on September 1, 2012 - 19:41 | 145 reads
Now Where Is He? (I.P.)
First published on August 29, 2012 - 18:53 | 195 reads
Selfish Husbands - I've had A Few (I. P.)
First published on August 29, 2012 - 17:01 | 174 reads
My Child is Missing!
First published on August 22, 2012 - 07:45 | 158 reads
Pansy Potter - Hallowed Be Thy Name! Part Two
First published on August 19, 2012 - 22:27 | 197 reads
Pansy Potter - Hallowed Be Thy Name! Part One
First published on August 19, 2012 - 20:30 | 159 reads
My I.P. (Late?) Thesaurus Word Finder!
First published on August 18, 2012 - 12:01 | 113 reads
Inspiration! I.P.
First published on August 13, 2012 - 16:28 | 307 reads
The Astrologer! (Late I.P.)
First published on August 10, 2012 - 13:53 | 158 reads
The Sky At Night!
First published on August 8, 2012 - 07:06 | 167 reads
The Bridge
First published on August 8, 2012 - 06:47 | 193 reads
A Tribute to Terry!
First published on July 27, 2012 - 08:16 | 254 reads
Maps! (I.P.)
First published on July 24, 2012 - 20:22 | 154 reads
One Last Breath!
First published on July 15, 2012 - 21:06 | 227 reads
Sylvia!
First published on July 15, 2012 - 20:55 | 148 reads
The Bank Job! (IP) A short play
First published on July 15, 2012 - 20:32 | 441 reads
Tops!
First published on July 13, 2012 - 08:28 | 205 reads
Why Do We Have To Get Old...When We're Old?
First published on July 10, 2012 - 15:31 | 178 reads
Truth, Dare, Kiss or Promise!
First published on July 10, 2012 - 15:06 | 227 reads
The Pigeon Fancier! (IP)
First published on July 9, 2012 - 14:10 | 207 reads
Who Will Notice? Who Will Care?
First published on July 9, 2012 - 11:16 | 137 reads
Ivan the Infiltrator! (Late IP)
First published on July 7, 2012 - 17:28 | 260 reads
Persephone Frobisher Frightens Me!
First published on July 5, 2012 - 08:31 | 167 reads
My Mum and The Caravan - Part Two!
First published on July 2, 2012 - 13:02 | 189 reads
My Mum and The Caravan - Part One The Party!
First published on July 2, 2012 - 12:35 | 139 reads
Going for Gold - The Sequel
First published on June 28, 2012 - 10:05 | 294 reads
Tiny Twitter Tales I P
First published on June 27, 2012 - 06:34 | 146 reads
Daddy or Chips?
First published on June 19, 2012 - 09:12 | 274 reads
Marshmallow or Birthday Cake?
First published on June 16, 2012 - 07:32 | 243 reads
A Mother's Eulogy - Written by the Mother in Question
First published on June 12, 2012 - 08:18 | 239 reads
Abundant Wonderment of my Fundament! I P
First published on June 4, 2012 - 09:32 | 273 reads
Come One Spring Morning!
First published on June 1, 2012 - 09:50 | 216 reads
"Fed Up?" No? Read This and You Soon Will Be!
First published on May 28, 2012 - 09:44 | 203 reads
Fecundity! Are You Kidding? I.P.
First published on May 28, 2012 - 09:16 | 227 reads
The Female Menopause!
First published on May 22, 2012 - 07:02 | 249 reads
Bedtime Drink! A Talking Head
First published on May 14, 2012 - 07:40 | 258 reads
The Wrong Bus I.P.
First published on May 14, 2012 - 07:25 | 196 reads
Macaroni Cheese - A Dish to Aid Memory! I. P.
First published on May 9, 2012 - 10:01 | 151 reads
Thoughts!
First published on May 8, 2012 - 05:35 | 277 reads
Court in the Rain I.P. Part Two
First published on May 1, 2012 - 06:38 | 247 reads
Court in the Rain! I.P. Part One
First published on May 1, 2012 - 06:24 | 234 reads
My Mum and The Christmas Washing Machine Story!
First published on April 27, 2012 - 08:49 | 262 reads
My Diet
First published on April 24, 2012 - 08:55 | 184 reads
Last Call for Novice Bitch!
First published on April 11, 2012 - 09:12 | 309 reads
Springing to Life! (I P)
First published on April 5, 2012 - 08:33 | 175 reads
'If' from an idea by Kipling and There's More!
First published on April 4, 2012 - 07:56 | 165 reads
My Mum - The Visit!
First published on April 2, 2012 - 09:01 | 271 reads
Loneliness! (I P)
First published on March 30, 2012 - 08:50 | 212 reads
A Report on Questiion Time in the House
First published on March 29, 2012 - 06:53 | 148 reads
My Mum and The Loss Adjustor!
First published on March 28, 2012 - 09:18 | 227 reads
"Despatches"
First published on March 21, 2012 - 08:44 | 161 reads
We Must Give Back!
First published on March 16, 2012 - 06:53 | 185 reads
My Mum - The Funeral!
First published on March 15, 2012 - 09:09 | 454 reads
Rags to Riches I P
First published on March 13, 2012 - 09:36 | 295 reads
Inspiration Comes With the Dawn!
First published on March 13, 2012 - 07:13 | 209 reads
I Want to Write a Poem and I Want to Write it Now!
First published on March 9, 2012 - 07:11 | 264 reads
My Mum - The Final Curtain
First published on March 8, 2012 - 08:53 | 302 reads
My Mum - Escapades!
First published on March 6, 2012 - 10:01 | 278 reads
A Figment of My Imagination...Or is it? I P
First published on March 5, 2012 - 11:04 | 221 reads
My Friend Joan
First published on March 3, 2012 - 01:00 | 212 reads
The Male Menopause!
First published on February 28, 2012 - 23:43 | 240 reads
A Mother's Advice to her Daughter!
First published on February 24, 2012 - 00:02 | 907 reads
Names and their Importance in Literature!
First published on February 16, 2012 - 21:02 | 881 reads
"Checkout" Scene Seven Supermarket Teashop Morning
First published on February 14, 2012 - 08:35 | 187 reads
Parkimson's m ever presentfriend
First published on February 13, 2012 - 08:38 | 306 reads
Checkout" Scene Six Supermarket Teashop Morning
First published on February 9, 2012 - 08:10 | 212 reads
My Mum and A Piano for Patrick!
First published on February 7, 2012 - 11:30 | 220 reads
In Answer to the Question "Tell Me What Love Is?"
First published on February 6, 2012 - 21:20 | 229 reads
When the Urge is Upon You!
First published on February 3, 2012 - 09:27 | 196 reads
The Summer Ball and Weapons of Mass Destruction!
First published on February 3, 2012 - 08:22 | 188 reads
The Open Door
First published on February 1, 2012 - 09:43 | 229 reads
"OR"
First published on February 1, 2012 - 09:28 | 181 reads
"Checkout" Scene Five Supermarket Teashop Morning
First published on January 30, 2012 - 23:24 | 193 reads
More Wartime Recollections of Mum Flo's Family
First published on January 28, 2012 - 23:14 | 237 reads
"Checkout" Scene Four Supermarket Teashop Morning
First published on January 23, 2012 - 08:10 | 194 reads
First Day at The Grammar!
First published on January 22, 2012 - 23:40 | 380 reads
If Dementia Comes!
First published on January 21, 2012 - 23:24 | 230 reads
In Search of Love (I.P.)
First published on January 21, 2012 - 23:15 | 199 reads
"Checkout" Scene Three Supermarket Teashop Morning
First published on January 21, 2012 - 09:03 | 229 reads
"Checkout" Scene 2 Supermarket Teashop Morning
First published on January 18, 2012 - 17:34 | 261 reads
My Mum - The Party Dress!
First published on January 16, 2012 - 13:45 | 481 reads
The Funeral
First published on January 14, 2012 - 23:45 | 275 reads
"Checkout"
First published on January 12, 2012 - 23:02 | 232 reads
Death is my Living!
First published on January 11, 2012 - 07:40 | 308 reads
Three Dead Twins
First published on January 9, 2012 - 07:47 | 284 reads
The Enigma
First published on January 6, 2012 - 09:04 | 186 reads
My Mum Revisited
First published on January 5, 2012 - 08:49 | 266 reads
Friendship
First published on January 4, 2012 - 09:45 | 300 reads
The Darkened Room
First published on January 2, 2012 - 21:24 | 260 reads
A Monologue Part Two The Buffet
First published on January 2, 2012 - 09:59 | 318 reads
Fuck!
First published on December 30, 2011 - 23:00 | 338 reads
Chocolate!
First published on December 30, 2011 - 17:24 | 351 reads
The Invitation A Monologue Part One
First published on December 29, 2011 - 22:44 | 378 reads
Waterworld - Manufacturers of a revolutionary new product
First published on December 28, 2011 - 22:10 | 321 reads
Love Waits Patient
First published on December 28, 2011 - 09:17 | 236 reads
Heroes!
First published on December 22, 2011 - 04:53 | 230 reads
My Mum
First published on December 21, 2011 - 09:22 | 313 reads
A Friendly Face
First published on December 19, 2011 - 09:11 | 237 reads
The Party
First published on December 19, 2011 - 08:11 | 308 reads
My Big Cooking Adventure!
First published on December 15, 2011 - 21:00 | 366 reads
A Dish Best Served Cold
First published on December 15, 2011 - 05:54 | 355 reads
