Writing Portfolio: New Beginnings

Collection of what will be my first serious attempt at creating a real writing portfolio. Feel free to comment on what you enjoyed and what you think needs improvement.

A Tramp's Life

Giselle cowered into the corner of the alley. Her dark brown eyes quivered with fear, as the sinister monstrosity trudged towards her. The saliva dripped slowly from his mouth, trickling onto her black hair. He stuck out his tongue, and traced it slowly across her face. She detected the faint aroma of old onions. Giselle shuddered in revulsion, and gave a small whimper. She was used to having males drool all over her, but never at such breathtaking proximity.