Faceless Parts One and Two by 27
Thu, 2005-10-27 12:59
#1
Faceless Parts One and Two by 27
I like these.
They tell a story well from the first person and that is not easy. They tell it so well that it may even be true - or you think it might, which is more important.
http://www.abctales.com/node/545700
http://www.abctales.com/story/27/2005-faceless-part-two
This is conventional writing at its best.
Your thoughts?
AliciaB
you're right it's true!!! incredibly
AliciaB
haha - good point - didn't realise the way it all sounded together - will change - thank YOU!
AliciaB
actually, guys.. this is part of a novel called 'ten men' ... real life dating debacles! sex in the city with depth is what I'm trying to aim for!
pls if you have any criticism let me know, as I'm looking to really whip it into shape before I send it with the other stories to publishers etc. this is only the first draft.
thank YOU also t cook, for your feedback.
AliciaB
hey Pesky, thanks. by the way, he didn't really have boils - i do have some discernment when it comes to men, though clearly not all that much!
www.wordhead.co.uk is my dubai blog, yep!
AliciaB
another dubai blog is: secretdubai.blogspot.com
it's by a friend of mine and is full of scandal -- it's a fab insight to the murky country, if you're interested. it actually got closed down and reopened by the government due to a petition.
AliciaB
another dubai blog is: secretdubai.blogspot.com
it's by a friend of mine and is full of scandal -- it's a fab insight to the murky country, if you're interested. it actually got closed down and reopened by the government due to a petition.