Xy A World Without Men: Chapters 01 - 03

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Thu, 2006-02-23 05:59

I am giving this a cherry because it is such an intriguing and sinister concept. Excellent vizualisation of detail, the "martyr halls", the street signs. I suggest add more description of surroundings, politics, media...

Thu, 2006-02-23 07:04

Blimey Chimpy, how nice of you to pop in. Been a while hasn't it? Still not worked out how to do a link to the story yet? Bless. Well, nice to hear from you, perhaps you could pop in again in another couple of months. Great comment btw.

Thu, 2006-02-23 17:53

Juliet OC

ty Chimpy, i am losing all perspective on this so your cherry was well timed. You're suggestion about adding more detail is spot on, i will work in as i continue to edit. Juliet

Juliet

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