We'll tour the coffee houses

I will clal in sick with anyone who wnats me to go more or less anywhere, bored bored bored. work is boring. This poem however, is not boring. Not in the least. Span

Somebody likes Belle and Sebastian! Anyhow, I love the fact you managed to end the poem with the word 'Rugrats'. You're making non sequitir endings something of a trademark.

This is lovely. I'm sorry not to be more use than that, I haven't got anything especially profound to say. I'm listening to a CD I have made and it makes me smile and so does this. Hundreds and thousands on my hot chocolate please, and goulash and strudel if you'd be so kind...

Fabalicious. I liked the "flinching like a recuperating rottweiler" victim line, in particular. Joe

Thanks guys. I think i've *borrowed* from Belle and Sebastian before as well. I'm sure they won't mind. I'm building up to having a collection of Vienna based poems. Not all of them will end with the word Rugrats

Great opening line in particular. You're a tough one to critique, monsieur, because every bit of odd rhythm or over-extended metaphor seems to be done for comic effect - and so succeeds!