Does Billy brag?

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Does Billy brag?

I liked this piece enormously. I usually have some difficulty in reading this style of poetry, I don't know why but it never seems to flow...but this does and I enjoyed reading it. The last thought "That he would like to know a little less" struck a real chord with me...I reckon that should apply to an awful lot of people who think they know more than they do.

Juliet

Very good. I wish I could write poetry this well. Alas, it will not be, but at least we have people like Tim to keep uus entertained. Keep it up.

Give me the beat boys and free my soul! I wanna getta lost in ya rock n' roll and drift away. Drift away...

I loved "teetering on our verge of common ground" and the idea that using a supermarket alone is some kind of achievement.
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