bladderwrack by brighteyes

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Thu, 2006-04-20 19:35

Juliet OC

bladderwrack by brighteyes

http://www.abctales.com/story/brighteyes/bladderwrack

another cracker from brighteyes - love the Dr Who references - i always wanted a scarf like Tom's.

juliet

Thu, 2006-04-20 19:43

Brooklands

Yeah, this is great. Lots of energy and it takes real pleasure in language. The Autobot logo reference, although it made me smile, feels crowbarred in. Keep it up K. xx

Thu, 2006-04-20 21:57

brighteyes

Cheers guys. Do you reckon I should lop off that stanza altogether spack? "I have a room for life at the Home for the Chronically Groovy."

"I have a room for life at the Home for the Chronically Groovy."

Thu, 2006-04-20 23:51

Brooklands

Yes, I reckon so. It doesn't quite justify it's place, methinks. You are hitting a rich seam of poetry joy at the moment though Kirsty. Loving it. Joe

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