Chase - Bright Eyes

http://www.abctales.com/story/brighteyes/chase

This is rad. Tons of great lines:

"a myth on it's tea break. To think,
I could have cuffed you."

"Even the cemetaries -
jampacked ghost embassies -"

And oh oh oh, what an ending! Classy.

Not sure about:
"I double-took at a twist of jade
and it splintered into water."
I lost you here, K.

And I thought this inversion a bit wonky:
"where once I'd seen you sit"

Also the repitition of "where" stuck out, for me:
"So where to find you now?
I've tried everywhere"

Thanks!