bunting

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Mon, 2006-10-16 21:08

phase2

bunting

http://www.abctales.com/story/mcmanaman/bunting

This is JUICY writing :0) Every line so full of images. Haven't read any of his stuff for ages, loved this

Mon, 2006-10-16 21:58

ivoryfishbone

helloooooo phase2 ... xxx

Wed, 2006-10-18 20:32

phase2

Hullo Ivory :0) How are you?

Wed, 2006-10-18 20:47

cath_carr

gosh... hello you. How good to see you back here. Quick, write - we need you... (it's Liana)

Wed, 2006-10-18 23:03

Brooklands

Great poem - great build up - great pay off. Ta!

Thu, 2006-10-19 13:42

mcmanaman

thanks spack and phase2 - it was a speed poem that was going nowhere so I decided to throw some triplets in, who I think make it work. Thanks, macca

Sat, 2006-10-21 19:52

phase2

Hullo Liana :0) Trouble is I'm a very slow writer, and the computer takes after me, so Marley has usually woken up, or Ithe potatoes have burnt and I can't see the screen for smoke (I've no sense of smell) by the time I've managed to log on I thought it worked without the triplets. I thought that they and the other events just happened to coincide with something else. It was the sheet painting and wall to wall duvets I liked best

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